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一篇演讲,帮我找语法和词汇错误我等着呢,明天就用的:IWANTTOBEAVOLUNTEERFORSHANGHAIEXPOAsweallknow,Shanghaiwillhostthe2010ShanghaiWorldExpo,asaChinese,Ifeelveryexcited.Iamproudofmycountry.So,Ithink
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一篇演讲,帮我找语法和词汇错误

我等着呢,明天就用的:

IWANTTOBEAVOLUNTEERFORSHANGHAIEXPO

Asweallknow,Shanghaiwillhostthe2010ShanghaiWorldExpo,asaChinese,Ifeelveryexcited.Iamproudofmycountry.

So,IthinkasaChineseresident,Ishoulddosomethingusefulfortheworldexpo.Ithinkifwebecomeavolunteer,firstofall,havinghighqualityisveryimportantbecausewe,asvolunteersonbehalfoftheentireimageofChina,musthavehigh-quality,soIstudiedhard.Theremustbemanypeoplefrommanydifferentcountriesanddifferentnations.Sotherewillbeawiderangeofdifferentcultures.ThisreallymakeShanghai"aninternationalmetropolis,"thetitleofthetitle.

Secondly,IthinkEnglishisveryimportantfortheWorldExpo.Englishistheinternationallanguage,mostcountriesuseEnglish.SoifwespeakEnglishwell,wecanhelpforeignersbetter.AndpeoplefromothercountrieswillthinkChinesearefriendly.Therefore,themostimportantthingistotryyourbesttolearnEnglish.

Finally,IamverydisappointedthatIdon’tliveinShanghai.ButIbelieve:"wherethereisawill,thereisaway"!Iwilldomybestfortheexpo.

Toendmyspeech,Ihopetheexpowillbeheldsuccessfully.

3.Ihopetheexpowillbeheldsuccessfully.

中beheld应为behold,被动中hold应用过去分词hold而不是过去式held。

我查了,hold的过去分词是held

卜庆凯回答:
  1.Ithinkifwebecomeavolunteer.中wea矛盾,应该Ithinkifwebecomevolunteers.   2.IthinkEnglishisveryimportantfortheWorldExpo.中for应改为to是英语对世博会很重要.   3.Ihopetheexpowillbeheldsuccessfully.   中beheld应为behold,被动中hold应用过去分词hold而不是过去式held.   以上纯为个人见解.
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