一篇演讲,帮我找语法和词汇错误
我等着呢,明天就用的:
IWANTTOBEAVOLUNTEERFORSHANGHAIEXPO
Asweallknow,Shanghaiwillhostthe2010ShanghaiWorldExpo,asaChinese,Ifeelveryexcited.Iamproudofmycountry.
So,IthinkasaChineseresident,Ishoulddosomethingusefulfortheworldexpo.Ithinkifwebecomeavolunteer,firstofall,havinghighqualityisveryimportantbecausewe,asvolunteersonbehalfoftheentireimageofChina,musthavehigh-quality,soIstudiedhard.Theremustbemanypeoplefrommanydifferentcountriesanddifferentnations.Sotherewillbeawiderangeofdifferentcultures.ThisreallymakeShanghai"aninternationalmetropolis,"thetitleofthetitle.
Secondly,IthinkEnglishisveryimportantfortheWorldExpo.Englishistheinternationallanguage,mostcountriesuseEnglish.SoifwespeakEnglishwell,wecanhelpforeignersbetter.AndpeoplefromothercountrieswillthinkChinesearefriendly.Therefore,themostimportantthingistotryyourbesttolearnEnglish.
Finally,IamverydisappointedthatIdon’tliveinShanghai.ButIbelieve:"wherethereisawill,thereisaway"!Iwilldomybestfortheexpo.
Toendmyspeech,Ihopetheexpowillbeheldsuccessfully.
3.Ihopetheexpowillbeheldsuccessfully.
中beheld应为behold,被动中hold应用过去分词hold而不是过去式held。
我查了,hold的过去分词是held
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