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Greatlove,greatworld
Whatislove?Loveistheshoesyourmothermadeforyou.Loveisthebookastrangerpickedforyou.Loveisthelandthecountryofferedyou.Loveisallyourlifethesocietygivesyou.Andthegreatworldismadeofgreatlove.
Pleaselookthefollowingtherescene:
Sceneone:Amotherwassittingasideherbaby,shakingitslowlywithaslowsong.Lookingatherbaby,shedreamedthatitwouldbeausefulpersonwhenhegrown-up.Gradually,shewentintoherowndreambesideherbaby….
Scenetwo:Anoldmanslidedownwhenhewasclimbingthestairs.Atthattimeastrangerwomansawtheaccident.Soshewenttowardhimquicklyandgothimup.Bylucky,theoldmanwasOK.Thentheysmiledfacetoface…..
Scenethere:Inapark,amanwalkedbesideabeautifullakeandaboyfollowed.Suddenly,theboyshouted:Father,watchoutthegrass,anddon’tharmthegreen,OK?Themanlookedbackandsmiledtowardtheboy,thenhecomebacktotherightpath.
Manypeoplesaidthatthesocietyisdarkandtherearemanytraps.ButIbelievethesunshinehasexistedinallthecornersintheworld.
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