托福作文求批改,12.19号就考试了.

Advertisinginfluencepeople'sbehaviorinanegativeway.

Nowadays,withtheadventofthetelevisionandothermedias,numerousadvertisehavecometoourlifeandchangedourthinkingaboutwhichproductsweshouldchoose.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatweobviouslygetanegativeinfluencewiththeadvertisements'showingup.Icanhardlyagreewiththatgroupofguys.Inthefollowingessay,IwillexplainwhyIobjecttheviewsostrongly.

Firstandforemost,Advertisementsgiveusideasabouttheproducts.Admittedly,theadvertisementoftheproductsinmarketswillleadustoaclearwaythatwecanmakeachoicebyourselvesbetweenthesimilarthingsinfrontofuswhenwepurchasesomething.Weallknow,asacustomerofasupermarket,wedonothavemuchideaswhetherweshouldbuythisornotifwedonotgetanyinformationaboutproductsbeforesteppingintoit.Onthecontrary,onceweachievedcluesofproductsbytheadvertisements,whichmaybenotusefulforusbutatleastwecertainlywillhaveabasicexpressionaboutthat.Sowewillbeeasiertofindwhatwewantbyadvertisements.

Anothermajorreasonworthmentioningisthatwecustomersarenotfolly,andareresponsibleforwhatwechoose.Imeanwewillnotbefollowedbehindtheadvertisements.Someguys,actually,werecheatbytheadvertisementforseveraltimesandthentheyarecomplainingabouthowbadtheadvertisementis.Isthattrue?Idon'tthinkso.Weadultsshouldhavetheabilityofidentifyingwhichinformationistruthornot.Wecannotjustblametheadvertisementforbeingcheatoneortwotimes.Advertisementsarejustbenefitforabetterchoicethatwewillmake.Butitdoesn'tmeanadvertisementsneedtoberesponsibleforourchoice.

Fromallfactorsmentionedabove,itapparentlyshowstheviewissopartialandisnotverydifficulttocomeintoaconclusionthatadvertisementssurelybringusmoregoodthingsthanbadthings.Weshouldnotonlytakeintoaccountoftheinfluenceofadvertisementsandalsomakeourbraincoolwhenweneedtobuysomething.

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